Akadra's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Tutorial Collab '06]

27 errors on the destructable terrain.

Destructable terrain soesnt work!
I made a square with the name of square and an instance of square...
And everything the map named map0 in instance- and normal names and i mad a circle.
But if i start it up it says:

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 1: Statement must appear within on/onClipEvent handler
import flash.display.BitmapData;

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 2: Statement must appear within on/onClipEvent handler
import flash.geom.ColorTransform;

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 3: Statement must appear within on/onClipEvent handler
import flash.geom.Matrix;

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 5: Statement must appear within on/onClipEvent handler
var max:Number = 400;

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 7: Statement must appear within on/onClipEvent handler
var myMatrix:Matrix = new Matrix();

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 12: Statement must appear within on/onClipEvent handler
var myCT:ColorTransform = new ColorTransform(1, 1, 1, 1, 0, 0, 0, 0);

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 18: Statement must appear within on/onClipEvent handler
var myBmp:BitmapData = new BitmapData(1000, 1000, true, 0x00000000);

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 20: Statement must appear within on/onClipEvent handler
attachBitmap(myBmp, 0, "never", false);

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 22: Statement must appear within on/onClipEvent handler
attachMovie("hole", "hole_mc", 10);

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 23: Statement must appear within on/onClipEvent handler
hole_mc._visible = false;

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 25: Statement must appear within on/onClipEvent handler
myMatrix.translate(0, 120);

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 28: Statement must appear within on/onClipEvent handler
attachMovie("square", "square_mc", 11);

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 29: Statement must appear within on/onClipEvent handler
function makeMap(x) {

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 38: Statement must appear within on/onClipEvent handler
onMouseDown = function () {

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 59: Statement block must be terminated by '}'
if (myBmp.getPixel(_root[i]._x, _root[i]._y) != 0) {

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 80: Syntax error.
// colors instead of removing pixels.

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 57: Statement block must be terminated by '}'
if (_root[i]._name != "square_mc") {

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 80: Syntax error.
// colors instead of removing pixels.

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 52: Statement block must be terminated by '}'
if (_root[i]._name.indexOf("squar e") != -1) {

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 80: Syntax error.
// colors instead of removing pixels.

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 49: Statement block must be terminated by '}'
for (i in _root) {

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 80: Syntax error.
// colors instead of removing pixels.

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 42: Statement block must be terminated by '}'
onEnterFrame = function () {

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 80: Syntax error.
// colors instead of removing pixels.

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 42: Statement must appear within on/onClipEvent handler
onEnterFrame = function () {

**Error** Scene=Scene 1, layer=Layer 1, frame=1:Line 1: Statement must appear within on/onClipEvent handler
_root[i].removeMovieClip();

And more! Dont put codes in a collab what doesnt work! 27 errors!
Give me the real script please.Akadra,

[Invader Zim Interactive]

Yaay! i did it!

I think its a little wacky fault. but i made ALL of them fight! Zim and a robot guy, nick and bib? I dont watch the show...
But it was a cool game! two and a half thumbs up! Loved the animation too! original idea too!

Akadra,

Julianrocks responds:

So, you like it too?

yeah robots name is GIR

and its Dib.

Watch Zim. Its Awesome.
Thanx.

[Simple Preloader Tutorial]

I saw every tut on preloader and still i have a Q

You know... i saw every tutorial and tried them all... but none of them work!!!! grr. makes me mad!
And then i saw your tutorial, i tought: "Oh god! let this one help me!" And i see it is the same...
And i pop up with the question: Do i really HAVE to add a scene? or can i adjust the script alittle tiny bit? that it only skips to frame 1? coz if i add a scene... my whole movie is ****** up! and you know thats not good!
So i ask: Please... Do i REALLY HAVE to add a scene?.
Bdw the tutorial outlook looks good! i like the background!

Akadra,

James-Flash-Prod responds:

Rplace nextScene() with nextFrame().

[Stick cell demo.]

I Like it but make the walking and blood more...

real!

I knew how to beat this game: i am not gonna tell it but that guy that reviewd before me is dumb! I think his IQ is not higher then 50

[Z Ball - Phase3]

Very futuristic! wáW! cool!

make an sequel! with more things like obstacels! or an platform were you can do an power jump or something@!

[Runescape Simulator]

It was crappy drawn... but that makes it funny!

It was cool! i protect you! here is a 5!

[Scuba Hunter]

heartless...

Heartless...

[NightStrike]

M@ke m0re!

Th@t w@s s0 c00l.
I w@s sm!l!ng my f@ce 0ff!
C00l gr@ph!cs, n!ce v!0lence...
a gave you a five!